I got some helpful verbal feedback from my proposal, one was to change my audience age group from 18-25, as it's a large gap and my magazine wouldn't reach that many people. I have decided to change the age group to 18-23, as it's a smaller gap and my magazine will appeal towards a younger audience.
Another helpful comment was that my masthead was too stylised and didn't fit my house style. This will help me design a new masthead that is similar to other rap magazines like Vibe or XXL.
Another important comment was to have less adverts in my magazine, this is so i can have more editorial content which will help in constructing my contents page. I will alter my flatplan in order to do this.
Overall the feedback was positive and these comments were the only major changes I will make to my plan.
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